Days Fall like seconds,
Spring cries into
Summer months.
Why then, should pain last
As Years push past?

Love bends, not breaks.
Pain leaves for our sakes.
Water and wind and friend.
He sings here. With us.

Days may Fall.
Winters may Pass.
Memories may be broken.
But not our hearts,
For we know
Love remains on a Mountain.

From: [identity profile] camillar.livejournal.com


Gorgeous, El, just gorgeous! I love the last line "Love remains on a Mountain" God, that just sums up how I feel about BBM and Heath and all of it. Thanks so much for this
Camilla

From: [identity profile] el-wing.livejournal.com


Thanks so much, Camilla. I had to wait a couple of days to answer comments-- even now my emotions are so raw.


From: [identity profile] jadband.livejournal.com


Days may Fall. Winters may Pass. Memories may be broken. But not our hearts, For we know Love remains on a Mountain.

Just beautiful and so true. Thanks so much for sharing your feelings. Ursel

From: [identity profile] mariez65.livejournal.com


(((((el)))))) Simply exquisite. You have a real gift and I'm grateful you shared your feelings. Thanks.

Marie

From: [identity profile] browneyes67.livejournal.com


delightful
beauteous

'Love remains on a Mountain'
so will that line remain inside of me...

Anna

From: [identity profile] rain67.livejournal.com


"For we know
Love remains on a Mountain"

It does indeed. Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.

Kathryn

From: [identity profile] el-wing.livejournal.com


Thank you in return, Kathryn. I believe in that line.

el

From: [identity profile] freetraveller15.livejournal.com


Lovely.
I particularly liked the images of the seasons.
Thank you so much for sharing,
Paola

From: [identity profile] el-wing.livejournal.com


Thank you. Season are common metaphors, but their meaning transcends cultures.

thank you. It's been a rough yet happy week,knowing Heath was at least acknowledged by his peers for his talent.

love,
el

From: [identity profile] bluebirds-sing.livejournal.com


*Memories may be broken. / But not our hearts, For we know Love remains on a Mountain.* Yeah, and thankfully our hearts and minds possess a healing strength since they can keep those broken memories safe and fix them into something like a quilt that can warm our soul. :)
Thank you El for these beautiful verses. Hugs
Tina

From: [identity profile] el-wing.livejournal.com


Thank you, Tina. Time does make the pain lessen, and everyone here in this fandom can attest to how broken we've felt over the last year.

Thanks for the kind words. I'm happy that my poem touched you.
el

From: [identity profile] ousoonerfan.livejournal.com


"Love remains on a Mountain." So very true..I believe it is that way for all of us...

Thanks for sharing, C

From: [identity profile] fridayblues.livejournal.com


OMG
You made me cry.
*sniffs*
But the poem is very beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

PS: I've been busy. But I'll e-mail you soon :)
*hugs you*

From: [identity profile] elwings-things.livejournal.com


Aww, didn't mean to make you cry, but happy that my poem reached you.

Hope you're doing well and look forward to that e-mail.
*hugs back*

el
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