"It couldn't be that bad," I said over my shoulder, trying to convince Jack.

"Did you see her nails?!" Jack spat. "I'd rather die."

We found ourselves in a large dome. A huge tower loomed in front of us. Yang stuck behind us and Yin ascended first. We hustled along, forced to climb the cold, steel ladder high into the dome.

"Maybe she'd just like to watch," I said.

"She likes to watch and participate," said Yang.

I didn't ask how he knew that. I wondered if Yin and Yang had something going on with Nefarious.

I watched for an opportunity, a way out, but none came. I looked down; we were far above now, over half way to the top. I looked at my watch: four minutes left. We had to do something. Jump? A possibility but with those guns trained on us, I didn't want to chance it. No. I had a better idea. It was telekinetic mind-meld time. I whispered a suggestion into Jack's synaptic nether regions, "Now'd be a good time to do that tentacle thing."

His mind-linked to mine. "Geez, Ennis, I can't do it on demand. I have to be--"

"Be what?" I answered telepathically. "You have to be what?"

"Horny."

We were near the top-- Yin was already off the ladder. Now was the perfect moment. Jack was out of my reach with my hands, but not my brain-- 

Mind fuck time!

Jack moaned. It was too easy. Suddenly, Jack transformed, electric appendages grabbing the semi-automatics and copping a feel.

No time for that now! We had to save Great Aunt Emma and Shag Island.

I took a flying leap over Jack and onto roof. 

I heard a hum. The ray was warming up: the center was white hot, shrinking smaller and smaller, concentrating to a point. 

One minute left. 

I had no other recourse-- only thing I could think of to do.

As I threw myself on the ray, I heard Jack yell in back of me, "Nefarious! You win! I'll do it! Stop the ray!"

TBC


From: [identity profile] mrs-spamlad.livejournal.com


i just got caught up on this story- it's fun! the length of the chapters and style of writing made me feel like i was reading a comic book :)

i can't believe jack agreed- can't wait to see what happens next!
thanks,
jill

From: [identity profile] el-wing.livejournal.com


Thanks, Jill. Glad you're enjoying this, and that this has that comic book feel to it since that's what I've been shooting for.

el

From: [identity profile] dark-dreymer.livejournal.com


His mind-linked to mine. "Geez, Ennis, I can't do it on demand. I have to be--"

"Be what?" I answered telepathically. "You have to be what?"

"Horny."


Okay, that is made of complete win! Why can't superheroes in comics be more like these two :D

From: [identity profile] el-wing.livejournal.com


Making Jack horny with his mind isn't that difficult a task. Ennis makes Jack horny just by looking at Ennis in that tightout fit ;)


Thanks for reading,
el

From: [identity profile] grlewis.livejournal.com


As I threw myself on the ray, I heard Jack yell in back of me, "Nefarious! You win! I'll do it! Stop the ray!"
just wonderful.

From: [identity profile] el-wing.livejournal.com


Thanks. Jack doesn't want his new love damaged. Only reasonable...

thanks for reading and commenting.

el

From: [identity profile] gilli-ann.livejournal.com


Oh my. These superheros are the best. Telephatic tentacles and all. I'd love to see the movie. And of course I'm at the edge of my seat for the further Nefarious development.

From: [identity profile] el-wing.livejournal.com


I'm at the edge of my seat for the further Nefarious development and so am I. I plan to write this tomorrow, which means this will go unbeta'd again :( Maybe another furry will appear...

From: [identity profile] bowl-of-glow.livejournal.com


"It couldn't be that bad," I said over my shoulder, trying to convince Jack.

"Did you see her nails?!" Jack spat. "I'd rather die."


LOL!!

Too funny. :)
Thanks a lot for sharing!
*big hugs*
B.


From: [identity profile] el-wing.livejournal.com


Thanks, glad you liked that joke. Slutty fingernails always get to me!

From: [identity profile] mariez65.livejournal.com


I'm not sure what it says about me, but I can picture all of this so clearly! LOL. Yeah, definitely movie material (or a graphic novel!). And think of the merchandising - who wouldn't want a transforming tentacles Jack doll? But is Jack too late now? Yikes! Terrific, el. Thanks!

Marie

From: [identity profile] el-wing.livejournal.com


I wish I could draw human figures better. If I could I'd love to do a graphic novel. Alas, my ability to draw human forms, SUCK!

Thanks for reading,
el

From: [identity profile] trekfan.livejournal.com


WOW I loved the mind fuck stuff and I didn't know they were telepathic (or did I just not remember they are?)

I just want to know when they are going to turn this into a movie cause I would pay a gazillion dollars to see it :D

From: [identity profile] el-wing.livejournal.com


A movie? Thanks! I don't know. I'd have to think about it. Wasn't there a campy superhero movie in the 70s?




From: [identity profile] hoosier67.livejournal.com


What a funny story. You certainly have an amazing sense of humor. Guess I'll have to tune in next week to see what sexually deviant capers will be carried out for the sake of Shag Island and Great Aunt Emma.
Just curious but is Great Aunt Emma sexy?

Tracy

From: [identity profile] el-wing.livejournal.com


Just curious but is Great Aunt Emma sexy?

Don't know, but that's a thought. I've put this little question in my chapter notes for future reference ;)

From: [identity profile] lovelysmidge.livejournal.com


Heeheehee.
I love these guys. They are so funny.
Also, poor Jack has to be horny to use his rad tentacles.
...
Oh! Oh! Oh!
MIND FUCK IS MY ABSOLUTE FAVOURITE.
Much love,
Jules

From: [identity profile] el-wing.livejournal.com


I know some people didn't like the tentacle idea, but it makes him multi-talented-- and he has so much more pleasure to give.

From: [identity profile] lovelysmidge.livejournal.com


I freakin' love the tentacle idea! Who doesn't want extra limbs with which to fondle Ennis? Those people that don't like them: totally jealous.
I think this has to be one of the most uplifting stories I'm reading at the moment!
It's just like my old comic books!
...
Well, except with more sex. :D

From: [identity profile] ifyoucantfixit2.livejournal.com


These guys are funn fun funny. I think you have a great comedic mind.
You are simply the bomb...........love jan

From: [identity profile] george66.livejournal.com

The Weathermen part 14


Darling,

This is just pricelessly delicious. Your Jack is altogether a DIVA!! LOL!!

Mind Sex...LOVE IT!! LMFAO!

george

From: [identity profile] el-wing.livejournal.com

Re: The Weathermen part 14


Mind sex is the best-- after all, isn't all sex that way?

thanks,
el

From: [identity profile] torry28.livejournal.com


My husband asked me what was so funny, I told him it was written in a foreign language I couldn't explain, this is priceless.
I hope the nails of Nefarious are not shaped like a corkscrews. That would definitely put a whole new picture on pain. Poor Jack and Ennis they have to think of some quick mind games.
Thank you for gladden my heart, hope you and your family are doing alright.
Love,
Torry

From: [identity profile] el-wing.livejournal.com


I'd use that one on my husband, but since I don't read fic in other languages, I don't think he'd buy it! Nefarious' nails aren't corkscrews, just really long and sharp.

thanks for reading and the kind words to my family.

el

From: [identity profile] joetheone.livejournal.com

Don't do it


OK you can watch Nefarious but don't you dare join in or else you might find out you have more then you can handle. Joe

From: [identity profile] el-wing.livejournal.com

Re: Don't do it


Love you, Joe. You're so right about them being more than she can handle ;)

el

From: [identity profile] lorna59.livejournal.com


So funny that Jack was 'easy'.

What a place to end the chapter - hope Great Aunt Emma and Shag Island can be saved.

This is certainly a fun story but the writing should not be trivialized in anyway as the writing is of the highest calibre.

Thanks Lorna

From: [identity profile] el-wing.livejournal.com


Well, Jack is only "easy" for Ennis (and likewise).

Thanks for saying that this is highest caliber writing. I strive to write in a fast-paced style to mimic the comic feel. Glad I'm getting it right.

el
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