Date: 2008-01-19 06:13 pm (UTC)
Terrific chapter, el!

..He'd tripped backward on a rock, landed on his ass, got up and ran away with Jorge's laugh ringing in his ears and Nina barking beside him...

Aww...my poor Linden. *hugs him* I love him to bits, but I can't help but laugh a little at this image. But then when he pondered why anyone would want him ....it broke my heart. And I thought it was a great idea to give us this chapter from his perspective.

.. he realized Jack's mind was sharp, always searching. Ennis was smart too-- but a different kind of sharp. Ennis was nature- and season-savvy. Jack was people savvy..

What wonderfully apt descriptions of both them. And Linden's a smart cookie himself.

"No use sittin' here frettin' more," Jack said, finally. "Might as well do it."

Well, I'm frettin', that's for sure - about Jack, about Ennis,about Nina, about Linden, about everyone and everything! Your usual top-notch stuff. Thanks!

Marie

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