ext_366989 ([identity profile] lorna59.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] happy_never_after 2009-05-03 06:53 am (UTC)

What a great chapter.

Jake had some classic words and thoughts and my favourite were:
"Sometimes there aren't any words." Not that I wanted him to stop talking: it was my attempt at sage advice."

"I laughed maniacally just like in that fantasy I had, then I went in for a long hot kiss just to butter him up so he'd be easier to spread."

The discovery of Johann's ashes was so exciting - you do write a terrific mystery.

Jake working out how many calories he had consumed with peanut butter was hilarious.

This has been and continues to be a really amazing story.

Thank you
Lorna


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